"The most important thing I got from the critique was to make my blog posts more personal: to let myself shine through and engage my readers...I've now written some posts that are more authentic and I can already feel the difference."
Career Coach's Blog Gets a Blog Squad Makeover on Video
(San Diego, CA) July 19, 2007 - Joan Schramm is a career coach who helps people find better jobs. Her blog, however, wasn't doing its job of finding new clients for her business.
So she called in The Blog Squad for a blog critique. The Blog Squad is a team of blogging experts in California, Denise Wakeman and Patsi Krakoff, Psy.D. They delivered their blogging advice via screen cast video and Ms. Schramm watched and learned on her computer in Maryland.
Small business bloggers are being scrutinized by the expert eyes of The Blog Squad with their blog rescue services. Ms. Schramm called The Blog Squad when she felt her blog wasn't getting enough traffic: "I wanted a blog critique because I had a sense that I just wasn't 'getting' it with my blog and I didn't know why."
"Often professionals lack blog marketing savvy to get good results from a blog," explains Ms. Wakeman. "We do a complete analysis of the blog's usability, branding, design, content and search engine optimization. There are clearly suggested next steps to get business results."
Ms. Schramm's blog, "Accelerating Momentum," is found at http://blog.achieve-momentum.com/ and is a resource for people to get news, tips, and strategies for success in their career and life. It resides on her website at www.achieve-momentum.com.
"The most important thing I got from the critique was to make my blog posts more personal: to let myself shine through and engage my readers," states Ms. Schramm. "I've now written some posts that are more authentic and I can already feel the difference. We're in the process of making format changes and the blog will look cleaner and more accessible when we're finished."
Readers of Ms. Schramm's blog can subscribe to be a part of a community where they learn to manage workplace issues, toxic bosses or co-workers, employee problems, improve leadership expertise, use assessments for both professional and personal benefits, communicate well and, ultimately, start loving their job and living the life they deserve.
The Blog Squad uses screen cast videos to deliver detailed analysis of a business blog, what works, and what needs to be changed. With video technology, they can deliver services through the Internet anywhere in the world.
Businesses interested in improving their blog results should visit www.buildabetterblog.com/blog-critique.html for for details on how to get started and book their critique.
About The Blog Squad:
Blogging experts Patsi Krakoff and Denise Wakeman are The Blog Squadâ„¢. They have teamed up to help professionals harness the power of blogs, newsletters, and ecommerce systems to make marketing tasks easier and more effective.
Between them they have 17 years of Internet know-how and write on 10 blogs. They know what works and what doesn't. You can read their popular blog at www.BuildaBetterBlog.com and get their free weekly ezine Savvy eBiz Tips.




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